Tweaked puzzle – looking for private feedback

A few weeks ago I posted a puzzle that I’m using in my newest adventure. I haven’t been totally happy with the original version, so I created a new version.

I’d like to get some feedback on this new version of the puzzle, but I’d rather get it privately instead of on the blog (so that comments from one person won’t affect another person’s thoughts on the puzzle). It isn’t the kind of puzzle that will take a long time to work on; a few minutes will be enough to tell whether you get it or whether it’s too opaque. It comes with hints, too.

If you’d like to help me out by looking at the puzzle and offering me your thoughts, please send me an email at


-Michael, the OnlineDM

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